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Come Story Telling with me!!

Welcome to DearSugar's new feature: Come Story Telling with Me!

Every Monday I am going to start the first sentence of a continuing story that you, the readers, will then finish. Do any of you remember the Choose your Own Adventure stories? This feature is quite similar-- and at the end of the week, I will post the completed story for you all to read, laugh at, and enjoy! Be sure to read the last comment and keep the story going from there. Feel free to be as imaginative and outlandish as you please, this is meant to be fun, so ladies, have at it!

Here we go:

I hopped into the shower and felt the sting from the hot water on my sunburned back...

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LeavingSong LeavingSong 9 years
"You look very lovely today, despite your little accident, the most gorgeous woman I've ever laid my eyes on" Of course I started to blush and giggle like a school girl. He grabbed my hand and squeezed gently and stared me deep in the eyes. I couldn't stop concentrating on his beautiful lush brown puppy eyes, I could feeling myself falling, and falling fast as his face grew closer to mine...
Klasick-DIva Klasick-DIva 9 years
As I ate in such a hurry. It had been hours since I'd eating and crab cakes were one of my guilty pleasures. "I see you keep your word" I murmured as I swallowed the tasty crab cakes. Octavio plastered a huge grin across his face as he whispered in my ear...
LeavingSong LeavingSong 9 years
I glanced around searching for Octavio, then saw him waving at me from his table. I made my way towards him, brushing past strangers and stopping when Elizabeth asked how I was doing. I assured her I was just dandy, and continued my way to Octavio, who had the most cutest grin on his face! Plopping myself down beside him, he poured me some champagne and set the crab cakes he promised in front of me. "Dig in!" He said, and I did...
Hollywoodjess Hollywoodjess 9 years
"How do you feel? Everyone is on deck getting ready to have lunch...are you up to some crab cakes?" I pondered the thought of moving from where I was because my dress was still torn, my face still throbbing and I’m sure I was rather unattractive at the moment. "Sure, I just need to freshen up, where’s the restroom?" After I safely made it to the tiny restroom that was big enough to only bend at a 45 degree angle, I dug through my bag and changed into some shorts, my cute bikini I just got and a white flowy tunic. I looked at my face in the mirror. Not too bad, it was workable. I pulled out my concealer and dabbed it over my pink nose and soon I looked decent enough to be seen in public again. I threw on some sunglasses, my big floppy hat and made my way upstairs to the deck where I could hear music blaring, laughter and the sound of champagne bottles bursting open.
popgoestheworld popgoestheworld 9 years
I woke up some time later, with that uncomfortable feeling of not knowing where you are, or how long you've been asleep. Immediately I felt a pounding in my face around my nose and I recalled with all-to-clear accuracy where I was. Whether I was asleep for minutes or hours, I didn't know, but Octavio had not moved from his spot. He smiled down at me as I woke up and said...
LeavingSong LeavingSong 9 years
his soothing voice comforting me. My sobs of pain and embarassment soon began to quiet down, traded in for little giggles as Octavio joked about the time he fell off his yatch. "I was sure a sight!" He said, and I laughed. Elizabeth brought me some water and soon I began to slowly drift off to sleep, with Octavio holding me...
Hollywoodjess Hollywoodjess 9 years
Enrique,Elizabeth and Octavio ran over to me as well as everyone else on the boat dock. Enrique pulled out a cloth from his pant pocket and held it over my nose as Elizabeth shrieked at the site of my blood. I sat up and noticed I had torn my dress and I was a complete mess. All of a sudden I felt a deep cry coming on and tears began to uncontrollably roll down my face. I couldnt control myself, I was sure a sight to tourists because people wouldnt stop starring. Suddenly Octavio picked me up while Enrique grabbed my tote bag and carried me onto his yatch. He sat me down on the couch below deck, pulled out ice from the champagne bucket then wrapped it in a towel and placed it over my nose....
wiciltd wiciltd 9 years
As we were walking towards the yhat I tripped and fell and face planted into the ground.. I broke my nose and blood spurted everywhere..
Supermom Supermom 9 years
Octavio smiled and said,"You can be 'liberated' once we get on my yatch."
LuckyGrl-83 LuckyGrl-83 9 years
"Oooops... guess my girl couldn't wait til we got to the beach to come out. I've always wanted to go to a European beach where clothing is optional. I can imagine it to be a very liberating feeling. What do you think??"
popgoestheworld popgoestheworld 9 years
Pardon me for noticing, but your dress strap has, uh, slipped. I looked down and groaned -- apparently I had been channeling my inner Britney or Tara, and half my breast was showing. I covered up, and then tried to make light of it by saying,
partysugar partysugar 9 years
We pile into Enrique's small silver car and cruise through the Spanish streets toward the marina. I'm in the back seat next to Octavio, the wind running through my hair. I turn towards him and he leans in and whispers,
peggs peggs 9 years
get seasick.
pinkflats pinkflats 9 years
...you any good on the boat." i looked down at my shoes, took off the straps of my shoes, placed them aside and slipped in a pair of Elizabeth's sandals. "that was fast," Elizabeth said with a smirk. We all then started to laugh as I though to myself that everything will go smoothly today as long as I don't....
Hollywoodjess Hollywoodjess 9 years
who is extremely gorgeous! Standing there in khaki shorts and a blue button down shirt accompanied with brown leather loafers, he smiled at me, all six foot two--manley broad shoulders of him--smiled at me. I lusted myself towards him and held my hand out to greet him. He leaned down and kissed my hand when I felt I was blushing and then noticed that Elizabeth and Enrique were staring at me like a museum exhibit. Elizabeth chimed in and grabbed the both of us saying "Octavio is Enriques family friend...ahem...hes a very astounding artist here in Spain and he also has an amazing yatch that we are so reluctant to be able to spend the day on! Right Ocatvio??" He laughed and said "of course, I hope you have some deck shoes because those heels wont do...
tati33 tati33 9 years
I walk into my room, as Elizbeth proposed that I stay with her...As I look out my window in the mid afternoon, I see that Spain is just amazing.. its architecture..it's culture so rich! This is a great escape from the craziness that I was in. I plan to enjoy myself, have a good time & meet some great people. Then I hear Elizabeth calling me so that she can show me around...As I come down the stairs, I see Elizabeth & Enrique's friend..Ocatvio..
summer-roberts summer-roberts 9 years
go to the nightstand where I left my Blackberry. I dial her up and tell her about my situation. She invites me over for coffee. When I arrive at her villa, I am taken aback by the beauty of it's architecture.
partysugar partysugar 9 years
my old friend from college Elizabeth has a villa on the Southern coast of Spain in Puerto de Santa Maria in Cadiz! She owns and runs a beach bar with her boyfriend Enrique...maybe I could get a little place there and work behind the bar for awhile. I turn from the closet eager to contact her and
pinkflats pinkflats 9 years
my ex-husband stole all of our money on our joint bank account so he and and his young, red-head mistress could start a new life in Malibu. I don't know what's worst that I didn't try to seek revenge like my girlfriends have suggested or that this sort of thing, husband leaving wife for a hot younger girl is so typical in our society. I'm hoping that my trip to Madrid, funded by my wonderful mother will change my life, and who knows I might meet a gorgeous Spanish bullfighter. Okay a woman, in her mid-30s, can still wish like a teenager, right? Anyways as I look through the closet filled with turtle-necks sweaters and cardigans, I thought of hitting the local boutiques to find myself new wardrobes. That's when I realized that....
LaLaLaurie06 LaLaLaurie06 9 years
Sure he may have been toting a pretty skinny little Christina Aguilera look-alike on his shoulder and I might have just gotten out of a Britney-post-Kfed phase, but I knew I looked good all cleaned up! I had gotten my act together since that fateful day when I found the...
Misskastar Misskastar 9 years
Turning my neck to look, I noticed the imprint of my bandeu bikini top. It is going to burn for days but my fabulous time at the beach bbq was so worth it. I still cannot believe that the first time I run into him I am relaxed and wearing next to nothing...couldn't have been better!
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