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Welcome to DearSugar's new feature: Come Story Telling with Me!

Every Monday I am going to start the first sentence of a continuing story that you, the readers, will then finish. Do any of you remember the Choose your Own Adventure stories? This feature is quite similar-- and at the end of the week, I will post the completed story for you all to read, laugh at, and enjoy! Be sure to read the last comment and keep the story going from there. Feel free to be as imaginative and outlandish as you please, this is meant to be fun, so ladies, have at it!

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"Get me out of this car!!!!!" I thought to myself as I approached the 5th hour of my slow crawl back from a great girls' weekend away. Although I had a blast with my college friends, I couldn't wait to get home to Ryan...

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great-escape great-escape 8 years
Its a shame too, because it had real potential
PinkNC PinkNC 8 years
Huh, what happened here. I think I agree with you 'mimoreno47'.
mlmoreno47 mlmoreno47 8 years
this story stopped making sense a looooong time ago!
SassyAss SassyAss 8 years
First things first I got to get rid of the sex smell all over me, my hair, and my clothes. Heavens I might as well throw those undies out now. Damn I really liked them, such a soft pink with two little hearts made of rhinestones attached at the sides. Just thinking of the fun I had with Josh and Danny I knew I'd have to hide my cell phone for a good week. I shuddered at the thought of Ryan answering it in my absence. I'll definitely hide it and fast... Right after my bubbly soak in the tub. I tell myself "If I make it through this day, just one more time, then...maybe then.... I'll settle down and be fair to the ol boy.
SassyAss SassyAss 8 years
First things first I got to get rid of the sex smell all over me, my hair, and my clothes. Heavens I might as well throw those undies out now. Damn I really liked them, such a soft pink with two little hearts made of rhinestones attached at the sides. Just thinking of the fun I had with Josh and Danny I knew I'd have to hide my cell phone for a good week. I shuddered at the thought of Ryan answering it in my absence. I'll definitely hide it and fast... Right after my bubbly soak in the tub. I tell myself "If I make it through this day, just one more time, then...maybe then.... I'll settle down and be fair to the ol boy.
cravinsugar cravinsugar 8 years
Doctor! She's awake again! I heard when i came too. I apparently was really in the hospital with a bumped head. I was still shaking off the gross shiver i got from the sleazy EMS guy when I remembered I wanted to check to see if the cheating was just a dream or real... I remembered that he had been seen with said hot woman Saturday night, so I asked him: "Ryan, I tried to call you Saturday before I hit my head, but i figured you must be out with your boys. What did ya'll end up doing?" He hesitated for the tiniest second before saying, while staring at the blanket on my legs..."
cravinsugar cravinsugar 8 years
Doctor! She's awake again! I heard when i came too. I apparently was really in the hospital with a bumped head. I was still shaking off the gross shiver i got from the sleazy EMS guy when I remembered I wanted to check to see if the cheating was just a dream or real...I remembered that he had been seen with said hot woman Saturday night, so I asked him: "Ryan, I tried to call you Saturday before I hit my head, but i figured you must be out with your boys. What did ya'll end up doing?"He hesitated for the tiniest second before saying, while staring at the blanket on my legs..."
WhatTheFrockBlog WhatTheFrockBlog 8 years
I rolled my eyes at Brookes. Sure, he may be hot, but to hit on a girl who just passed out from seeing her dead fiance's decapitated head? LAME.
WhatTheFrockBlog WhatTheFrockBlog 8 years
I rolled my eyes at Brookes. Sure, he may be hot, but to hit on a girl who just passed out from seeing her dead fiance's decapitated head? LAME.
cravinsugar cravinsugar 8 years
And then I really did wake up. In the back of an ambulance. I had passed out after seeing Ryan's decapitated head. Horrible. I looked around and found myself staring into the eyes of a hot EMS guy, who totally could have been a part of some EMS/Firefighter calendar. His last name is Brookes. I said, "Brookes, where is my car?" He said they moved it. He asked if I knew ryan, and I told him yes...I was so emotionally wrecked i didn't know how to feel so i ended up blabbering on nervously about how i knew him, that he had cheatedon me, that i was on my way back to give him hell and break up with him, and now he was dead and i of course still loved him. then i burst into tears. Brookes took me into his strong, arms, which, were rather large if i might add, and i felt the warmth from his body and started to feel a little better. He then said..."We have to go get you a cat scan to be sure you sisn't injure anything in your head when you fell, but after care to go get some dinner? I know the timing is probably off, but I feel like you don't want to be alone right now. am i right?"
cravinsugar cravinsugar 8 years
And then I really did wake up. In the back of an ambulance. I had passed out after seeing Ryan's decapitated head. Horrible. I looked around and found myself staring into the eyes of a hot EMS guy, who totally could have been a part of some EMS/Firefighter calendar. His last name is Brookes. I said, "Brookes, where is my car?" He said they moved it. He asked if I knew ryan, and I told him yes...I was so emotionally wrecked i didn't know how to feel so i ended up blabbering on nervously about how i knew him, that he had cheatedon me, that i was on my way back to give him hell and break up with him, and now he was dead and i of course still loved him. then i burst into tears. Brookes took me into his strong, arms, which, were rather large if i might add, and i felt the warmth from his body and started to feel a little better. He then said..."We have to go get you a cat scan to be sure you sisn't injure anything in your head when you fell, but after care to go get some dinner? I know the timing is probably off, but I feel like you don't want to be alone right now. am i right?"
popgoestheworld popgoestheworld 8 years
So it was all just a dream! But wait, was it? When did I find out Ryan cheated? Before or after that night at the club? I don't know if it was the drinking or the head wound, but I was having trouble distinguishing between my dream and reality. I thought I would test the waters a little and said to Ryan in a whisper:
popgoestheworld popgoestheworld 8 years
So it was all just a dream! But wait, was it? When did I find out Ryan cheated? Before or after that night at the club? I don't know if it was the drinking or the head wound, but I was having trouble distinguishing between my dream and reality. I thought I would test the waters a little and said to Ryan in a whisper:
Hollywoodjess Hollywoodjess 8 years
"how are you feeling?" I looked at him and notice the balloons and flowers behind him that flooded the room. What on earth was going on. I began to panick and sat up so fast the IV in my arm tugged until I shrieked. Ryan grabbed my hand and exclaimed that I had slipped on the dance floor after a few too many drinks when I was out with my girlfriends last weekend and hit my head on a speaker next to the DJ. "We were worried about you sweety...but Im so happy your awake." He smiled and I sarcastically smiled back at the thought of all this. I was a regular Dorothy in the Wizard of Oz having these crazy dreams minus the tornado and Auntie Em.
berberry3311 berberry3311 8 years
Everything was blurry as I opened my eyes. The lights were so bright and I heard a woman " Doctor, I think shes waking up." " Quick somebody get her fiance." I sat up in bed and eveyrthing started swirling so I laid back down. The doctor came to the bed as said...
smp7328 smp7328 8 years
I slammed on my brakes, put on the emergency brake, and got out of my car. All the while, people behind me were honking their horns and screaming at me to move. But those screams were fading in the background as I knelt beside the head of my boyfriend, whom only minutes before had I been cursing for cheating on me. With tears streaming down my cheeks, I spoke softly "Why? Why did he have to die? I never wanted this to happen." Then all of the flashing lights went out and the noises were silenced as she blacked out next to Ryan's head.....
partysugar partysugar 8 years
Oh my god!!!! I screamed, shocked, horrified, traumatized.
MamaD MamaD 8 years
As I gazed out the window of our car, I began to make out the vehicles that were involved in the accident that had so terribly slowed the progress of our return trip!!!The police and EMTs had just gotten to the accident scene. They hadn't been able to fully evaluate what they were dealing with. As we inched forward i noticed a round shaped object laying on the ground a few yards in front of a car with a broken windshield. A body had come through the windshield and found its finally resting place on the hood!!! I looked away from the horrid sight in time to make out the round object on the ground just outside my window!!!! It was a human head.....and it was Ryan's!!!!!!
popgoestheworld popgoestheworld 8 years
scream! "Someone had better be DEAD," I grumbled under my breath as we inched along. I could see the sirens lighting up the night sky just a few hundred yards ahead, and with each passing minute I was closer to an open road. As I neared the accident I picked up my cell to call Ryan again, hoping he would stop ignoring me and pick up my call. No answer. I tried again. No answer, but I was distracted by the faint sound of "Livin on a Prayer" out my window. Funny that I would hear Ryan's ring tone way out here. Just another reminder of that bastard! I hung up again in exasperation and the music suddenly stopped.
popgoestheworld popgoestheworld 8 years
scream! "Someone had better be DEAD," I grumbled under my breath as we inched along. I could see the sirens lighting up the night sky just a few hundred yards ahead, and with each passing minute I was closer to an open road.As I neared the accident I picked up my cell to call Ryan again, hoping he would stop ignoring me and pick up my call. No answer. I tried again. No answer, but I was distracted by the faint sound of "Livin on a Prayer" out my window. Funny that I would hear Ryan's ring tone way out here. Just another reminder of that bastard! I hung up again in exasperation and the music suddenly stopped.
Bukalala Bukalala 8 years
give him a murder sandwich! I began to think about all of the little signs I had seen...all of the late nights at work, "hang up" calls to the apartment, lies... I wanted to..
JBlondie JBlondie 8 years
and tell him what a creep and jerk and b*stard he is for cheating on me! It was bad enough that a friend called me and said that she had seen Ryan with another "hot" woman, but then to call his house and have some chick answer! I couldn't believe it, I was so furious! I couldn't wait to...
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